Saturday, January 15, 2011

before the ruins

There's cracks in the ceiling
and cracks in the mirror
nervous smiles in the architectural exoskeleton.
Gravity multiplies
and the teeth turn to mercury.
The rebar slowy curls
and tense rivets empty their moans into the night.
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3 comments:

  1. RajlakshmiJanuary 16, 2011 at 12:36 AM

    this is an amazing write... beautifully worded and loved the vivid images portrayed here

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2011 at 3:00 AM

    and tense rivets empty their moans into the night ... I like your words, excellent choice to paint a picture.

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  3. GabbyJanuary 16, 2011 at 1:09 PM

    Have your lovely book and web url but would love to email you. Not doing the seminar but enrolled in Feb advanced course. You are a light.

    gabby
    ghyman@gmail.com

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